Brianna Powell

[briannapowell]

Well, this is where I'll be putting my stuff. Don't mind if it isn't too grand.

I do appreciate any feeback, just putting it in the thread is good.

www.deviantart.com/deviation/60249497/

And here's the image if you don't want to click on the link. Not sure if it's too big though.



My own critique: I don't like how long their arms look, nor how the torso on both of them looks small. Hm... I do plan on working on another one. I'll figure something out.

[briannapowell]

Here's a second one I did, it's from my fanfic Reincarnation.. ...Just read the fic if you need help understanding, it's the end of chapter 6.

www.deviantart.com/deviation/60251820/

[zan189]

Wow.
I like the second one a lot. It's so wild and tender at the same time.
Without wanting to hurt your feelings (it's always so hard to write critique down and not make it "sound" harsh) you should practice on the hands. (not like I could do it even the way you did it, but they don't look too great yet)

[briannapowell]

Hey, critiquing is something I must endure, and I love that you gave me your feedback. Thank you! -Smile.-

[zan189]

I'm glad to hear it! Keep it going, I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.

[briannapowell]

I'll get on that. I might put up a sketch of what Powell's supposed to look like, but I haven't decided if that's fanart or not since she's an original..

[zan189]

Hm... I suppose if she's an original character that developed out of the HP-universe, one could count it as fanart. I would. But there's also one board where people can put up shameless self-ads, maybe you can put it there if you're not sure?

[briannapowell]

I think I will put it up there. -Nods.-

[moogle]

I like them. In a way sometimes things that are meant to be wrong become a part of your style. I sometimes purposley have huge eyes, or larger hands, etc. It's just a matter of figuring out your art style.

[briannapowell]

I haven't quite figured out my style, but I hope to soon. My hands seem to be undetailed all the time, and I like drawing eyes like that now, instead of large anime-ish eyes.